Аватарское

[Dessie]

Дабы не посеять: пост на Пандоре - в основном о фонетике.
Официальный гайд по планете, основанный на нем и сценарии пост Беатрикс. Немало интересных деталей и отсылок, кое-что о вырезанных сценах плюс сравнение с русским дубляжом.

- Oel ngati kamеie.
- Kame ngat.

"Спасибо" - Ireiyo.

Нда, вот я тоже потом взяла и прочла сценарий >_<'

Отрывки, куски, кое-какие сцены. Язык - английский. В основном, для себя)

Good science starts with good observation.

GRACE
So you just figured you’d come out here to the most hostile environment known to man, with no training of any kind, and see how it went? What was going through your head?
JAKE
Maybe I was just tired of doctors telling me what I couldn’t do.

JAKE
I have to trust my body to know what to do. With Neytiri it’s learn fast or die.
Neytiri LEAPS off into space, falling, falling until she catches an enormous palm leaf and, gripping it, allows its DROOP to slow her fall. She lets go, plummeting, and catches another.JAKE FOLLOWS in a leap of faith. THE CAMERA PLUNGES with him, from leaf to leaf, down and down in a dizzying kinetic rush. He drops down from the last leaf, landing next to her on a game trail. He is exhilarated to still be alive. Neytiri is surprised -- that he followed. That he lived.

ANOTHER PLACE -- NEYTIRI STANDS utterly still, except for her ears, which move with a life of their own. Her eyes are closed. She speaks very softly to Jake -
NEYTIRI
When you hear nothing, you will hear everything. When you see nothing, you will See everything.
JAKE (V.O.)
Sometimes I have no idea what she’s talking about.

JAKE (V.O.)
It’s been a month and I’m still not allowed to make a kill. She says the forest hasn’t given permission.

JAKE
I made a kill today. We ate it. I know where that meal came from.
GRACE
Other body. You need to take care of this body.
JAKE
Yeah yeah.
GRACE
Jake, I’m serious -- you look like crap. You’re burning too hard.
Jake takes the cigarette out of her mouth and stubs it out.
JAKE
Get rid of this shit, then you can lecture me.
GRACE
I’m telling you, as your boss and someone who might even consider being a friend someday, to take some down time.
JAKE
Not now. Tomorrow we leave for Iknimaya.
GRACE walks past Jake, starts making herself coffee.
GRACE
Yeah -- you’re gonna go ride a banshee. Or die trying.
JAKE
That’s right, Grace. This is what I’ve been working for.
GRACE
And this is your check up from the neck up, Marine. You’re getting in way too deep. (she turns away) Trust me, I learned the hard way.

GRACE
A scientist stays objective -- we can not be ruled by emotion. But I poured ten years of my life into that school. They called me sa’atenuk. Mother. (turning to him) That kind of pain reaches back through the link.
GRACE sits down at the table, looks intently at Jake.
GRACE
It’s a job. Learn what you can -- but don’t get attached.
GRACE looks at him with real PAIN in her eyes.
GRACE
It’s not our world, Jake. And we can’t stop what’s coming.

JAKE (V.O.)
I may not be much of a horse guy. But I was born to do this.
ANOTHER DAY. Jake dives, playing hide and seek with Neytiri among the clouds. They are wild and free in a wild world. She grins and banks hard, diving --catch me if you can. He DIVES after her.

Neytiri takes his hand, because that’s what the Na’vi do when they’re telling you something important.

JAKE lets the DRUMS and CHANTING flow through him. He lets himself go, dancing from the inside, channeling the primal energy. GRACE is rocking out, grinning. We see the young girl, so repressed, who lives within her. Jake and Neytiri flow amongst the dancers, but they are looking only at each other. A couple of the young girls watching from outside the circle are giggling and talking about them. Mo'at and EYTUKAN follow their look, seeing the obvious connection.
MO’AT (subtitled) We cannot let this seed grow. Her path is with Tsu’tey.

HIGH IN THE BRANCHES of a tree, Jake watches as Neytiri gently bends a large pitcher-like flower toward her, sipping nectar which is sweet and thick as honey. An incredibly sensuous image.

LOOKING DOWN into a hole dug among tree roots. The body of an old Omaticaya WOMAN lies curled there like an unborn baby in the womb of the earth. The purple flower is gently placed on her body, joining flowers, totems and beads.

JAKE SITS in front of the video log camera, late at night. It is many log entries later. He has lost a lot of weight. He looks like a junkie watching a test pattern.

Опасный для жизни обряд инициации с Охотой Снов, предшествующий ему разговор с Грейс, признание Джейка, что он меж двух огней, "Ты никогда не можешь по-настоящему быть с ней". В своих видениях во время обряда Джейк сливается с духом Торука и видит разрушение на Пандоре.

О священном дереве:
JAKE
It’s like -- a sound you feel.

JAKE
Neytiri, you know my real body is far away, sleeping.
NEYTIRI
This body is real. (she touches his forehead) This spirit is real.
Her eyes are luminous, honest, infinitely deep.
NEYTIRI
When I was first your teacher, I hated all Sky People. But you have also taught me. (whispering) Spirit is all that matters.
She lays her head down, against his chest, listening to his heartbeat.
NEYTIRI
I am with you now, Jake. We are mated for life.
JAKE
We are?
NEYTIRI
Yes. It is our way. (innocently) Oh. I forgot to tell?
He rouses up, making her look at him.
JAKE
Really, we are?
NEYTIRI
We are.
Jake considers this.
JAKE
It’s cool. I’m there.
He lays his head down, and her arms enfold him, sheltering him as he sleeps.
INT. SHACK - NIGHT
Jake’s eyes open in the darkness. He just lies there, thinking. In his coffin. In another world.

NEYTIRI
(subtitled)
We are mated before Eywa. It is done.
Tsu’tey turns to Mo'at and Eytukan, his face anguished.
TSU’TEY
(subtitled)
Neytiri was promised to me! Everything is changing. Everything is being destroyed!
Tsu’tey points at Jake, his pain shifting to rage.
TSU’TEY
(subtitled)
These aliens kill everything they touch, like poison.
MO'AT
Neytiri! If you choose this path, you can never be Tsahik. Your life will be wasted.
Neytiri looks at her mother -- sees the grief in her eyes.
NEYTIRI
I have chosen.

TSU’TEY draws his KNIFE, and bends down, grabbing Jake by the hair.
TSU’TEY
(subtitled)
This is a demon in a false body. It should not live.
He puts his knife to Jake’s throat but - NEYTIRI BLIND-SIDES him at full tilt. Tsu’tey sprawls, rolls, comes up to see -- Neytiri crouched like a lioness over Jake, her KNIFE and teeth bared, her ears flattened. She SNARLS with primal fury.

TIGHT ON MONITOR -- VIDEO-LOG IMAGE of Jake, looking haggard and borderline deranged, rambling in a late-night monologue.
JAKE (RECORDED)
They’re not going to give up their home -- they’re not gonna make a deal. For what? Lite beer and shopping channel? There’s nothing we have that they want. We’re a horror to them. We’re the monsters from space.
JAKE watches with a growing dread as his words condemn the people he has grown to love.
JAKE (RECORDED)
They’re never going to leave Hometree.

GRACE
They bulldozed a sacred site on purpose, to trigger a response. They’re fabricating this war to get what they want.
NORM
I can’t believe that.
JAKE
Yup. That’s how it’s done. When people are sitting on shit you want, you make them your enemy. Then you’re justified in taking it.

JAKE
At first it was just orders. Then everything changed. I fell in love -- with the forest, with the Omaticaya People -­ (he looks at her) -- with you. And by then, how could I tell you?

Out of the smoke, MO’AT appears in front of Jake. She raises a KNIFE and - SLASHES DOWNWARD. Jake looks down, surprised, to see his bonds falling away. He meets her eyes, which are filled with horror, but also something else. Call it faith.
MO’AT
You are one of us. Help us!

ANOTHER TROOPER rounds the corner. Trudy takes him down with a sharp BLOW to the windpipe and a THAI KNEE to the ribs.
Meanwhile the first TROOPER is getting up, but Max CLOCKS him heartily with a coffee urn. He goes down and stays down.
MAX
That was unexpectedly satisfying.
Trudy plants a kiss on Norm as he runs out of the cell.
NORM
Baby, you rock.

He looks over at Grace and freezes. She is looking down at a BLOODY HAND. She clutches her abdomen, covering the spreading stain. Looks at Jake, wide-eyed.
GRACE
This is gonna ruin my whole day.

Shafts of dawn light reach to the bottom of the grotto, lighting a single willow -- the MOTHER TREE. Ancient and gnarled, it grows in the center of the rock. Its ROOTS spread down to the grotto floor, where they merge with the roots of the willows ringing the Well -- forming a braided mat resembling the surface of a brain.

HIS BANSHEE -- bonded for life -- flaps down to a landing in front of him. He steps to it, and strokes its head. It nudges his chest like a horse.

NEYTIRI, TSU’TEY and MO’AT watch in stunned amazement as the legendary Rider of Last Shadow walks toward them.
NEYTIRI
(breathing the words)
Toruk Macto.
Neytiri raises her arms.
NEYTIRI
(shouting)
Toruk Macto!
ON THE FACES of the Omaticaya -- new hope dawning in their eyes. WHISPERS flow among them, the words REPEATED.

MO’AT steps back in awe as he approaches. He turns to Tsu’tey, who stares at him with fear and incomprehension. Jake plays to the rapt crowd as he says -
JAKE
(subtitled)
Tsu’tey of the Rongloa, son of Ateyo. I stand before you, ready to serve the People. (then just for Tsu’tey) You are Olo’eyctan, and you are the best warrior. I can’t do this without you.

Jake kneels next to Grace, taking her tiny human hand in his avatar hand.
JAKE
Hang on, they’re gonna fix you up.
Grace is barely conscious. She grips his hand.
GRACE
I -- always held back. But you gave them your heart. I’m proud of you, Jake.
Jake feels his throat close with emotion.
Grace’s eyes blaze with intensity though her voice is faint.
GRACE
Help them. You do whatever it takes. You hear me?
JAKE
I will.

JAKE
With your permission, I will Speak now. You would honor me by translating.
Tsu’tey gestures assent, and they face the clan together.

JAKE (V.O.)
When Toruk Macto called them, they came.

TRUDY
You know he’s gonna commit those bombers straight to the Well of Souls.
JAKE
That’s right. Because I gave it to him on a plate.
TRUDY
We both did.

The Na’vi paint and pierce themselves. Dance. Bathe in the smoke of cleansing herbs -- RITUAL PURIFICATION. HUGE DRUMS are beaten. A dark primeval energy. They are psyching themselves up for battle.

JAKE
Look, you chose me for somethin’. And I’ll stand and fight, you know I will. But I could use a little help here.
Jake senses Neytiri and turns.
NEYTIRI
Our Great Mother does not take sides. She protects only the balance of life.
She comes to him, intertwining her long fingers with his.
JAKE
It was worth a try.
They lean in, foreheads touching, bodies pressed together.
Holding each other -- in this, the last moment of peace.

TSU’TEY lies gasping, mortally injured. He looks up, grimacing, as an ampsuit looms over him.
LYLE WAINFLEET reaches down and grabs Tsu’tey by his queue, lifting him painfully.
WAINFLEET
I hear this is worse than death for you, chief.
WAINFLEET cuts Tsu’tey's queue off near the base. TSU’TEY SCREAMS in agony, his nervous system exploding on overload. Grinning, Lyle holds up the queue -- Tsu’tey's only connection to the world-consciousness which is his life.

Selfridge is stunned. Suddenly the ROAR of an ENGINE makes them all look up. OUTSIDE THE WINDOW, MAX sits in the cab of an enormous SLASH­CUTTER. Max flips Selfridge the bird and pushes a lever forward -
SELFRIDGE
Oh shit.
Selfridge DIVES as - K-RASHHHHH! The SPINNING TEETH of the SLASH-CUTTER tear through the window in a blast of glass and lethal air. Alarms go off. The technicians dive for cover in a blizzard of glass and shredded debris. The slash-cutter head pulls back, and AVATARS SCRAMBLE through the gaping hole into the Ops Center - The TROOPERS look up to see blue giants aiming weapons down at them. The battle is over in seconds. The avatars are holding the Ops Center. Selfridge lies there gasping, in his emergency mask. In shock. How could this be happening?

Quaritch looks down at Neytiri. She glares back at him, panting, scared but defiant.
JAKE (O.S.)
It’s all over Quaritch --
QUARITCH
Nothing’s over while I’m breathing.
JAKE
Kinda hoped you’d say that.

QUARITCH
How does it feel to betray your own race?

Нейтири убивает Куоритча, когда Джейк еще в сознании Аватара.
Кроме того, сцена со спасением в мобильном блоке более реалистична: Нейтири врывается, когда Джейк еще тянется к маске, и видит конкретно, чем можно помочь.

Jake touches her face, his pale human hand against the blue of her skin. There eyes meet across the glass of the mask -- together, separate. Worldless.

MO’AT tends to the mortally wounded TSU’TEY as AVATAR JAKE arrives with Neytiri. Mo’at has bound his wounds, but by her expression, it is clear he cannot be saved.
Jake kneels and Tsu’tey opens his eyes. Through a haze of pain, he recognizes Jake.
TSU’TEY
(Na’vi)
I See you, Jakesully.
JAKE
I See you, Tsu’tey te Rongloa Ateyitan.
TSU’TEY
Are the people safe?
JAKE
They’re safe.
Tsu’tey weakly clutches his severed queue.
TSU’TEY
I can never ride again, or bond with my woman -- or hear the voice of Eywa. I can not lead the People. You will lead them, Jakesully.
JAKE
No. I’m not officer material.
TSU’TEY
It is decided. Now do the duty of Olo’eyctan. Set my spirit free.
JAKE
I’m not killing you.
TSU’TEY
I am already dead.
JAKE
No.
TSU’TEY
It is the way. And it is good. I will be remembered --
Tsu’tey’s voice is weak, but thick with emotion.
TSU’TEY
-- I fought with Toruk Macto, we were brothers -- and he was my last shadow.
TSU’TEY’S HAND clasps with Jake’s in a fierce grip. Jake draws his knife. TSU’TEY’S POV --Jake leans forward, blocking the sun. HIS SHADOW falls across Tsu’tey.
JAKE
(Na’vi)
Forgive me, my Brother. Go now to the Mother Spirit.
By his movement, we know that he has ended Tsu’tey’s pain. Jake’s eyes well with tears as he continues reciting the prayer for the dead, and his Na’vi words carry over.

JAKE (V.O.)
A few chose to stay. Fewer were chosen.

JAKE (V.O.)
I better wrap this up. There’s a funeral tonight, and I don’t want to be late. It was someone very close to me.